No month of May
No twinkling stars
Shearing shears pulled the wool
from my skin and left me bare
Under its gaze
It never sees beyond me
God I
wish it would
Look away
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PenOfDamocles
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What is this? What does this mean?
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oh, nothing. Just something I wrote.
“If you only knew the magnificence of the 3, 6 and 9, then you would have the key to the universe.”
― Nikola Tesla
― Nikola Tesla
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PenOfDamocles
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Sorry, just being paranoid. It reminded me of something, I'm just not sure what.
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I don't think there is such a thing as being paranoid. If you had to describe what it reminded you of, the feeling it gave you, what would it be?
“If you only knew the magnificence of the 3, 6 and 9, then you would have the key to the universe.”
― Nikola Tesla
― Nikola Tesla
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PenOfDamocles
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I’m not sure…helplessness, inevitability. Something I was meant to forget. I’m sure it’s nothing.
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It may just be that I was successful with the poem in expressing the feelings I had when I wrote it. In any case, you aren't alone in those feelings, Pen.
“If you only knew the magnificence of the 3, 6 and 9, then you would have the key to the universe.”
― Nikola Tesla
― Nikola Tesla
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WiltedRoses
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funny with everything going on i stopped poetry but i feet inspired by this one . i dont know if its a response or just a shared felling maybe both.
The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.
The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.
"True alchemy lies in this formula: ‘Your memory and your senses are but the nourishment of your creative impulse’.”
― Arthur Rimbaud
― Arthur Rimbaud
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Lovely, Wilt.WiltedRoses wrote: ↑October 23rd, 2024, 6:43 pm funny with everything going on i stopped poetry but i feet inspired by this one . i dont know if its a response or just a shared felling maybe both.
The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.
“If you only knew the magnificence of the 3, 6 and 9, then you would have the key to the universe.”
― Nikola Tesla
― Nikola Tesla
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That's beautiful, Kat.
It invokes in me the feeling of staying in the sun, strangely.
It invokes in me the feeling of staying in the sun, strangely.
your worst enemy is yourself