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That's beautiful, Kat.
It invokes in me the feeling of staying in the sun, strangely.

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funny with everything going on i stopped poetry but i feet inspired by this one . i dont know if its a response or just a shared felling maybe both.

The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.
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Lovely, Wilt.

funny with everything going on i stopped poetry but i feet inspired by this one . i dont know if its a response or just a shared felling maybe both.

The Vast perfection of emptiness.
Skitters on the void of time.
Calling " find me the lie I told ".
Tears fall like diamonds we call stars.
Seeking mercy for there owner.
Would you call me a liar ,
Or do you weep also.

It may just be that I was successful with the poem in expressing the feelings I had when I wrote it. In any case, you aren't alone in those feelings, Pen.

I’m not sure…helplessness, inevitability. Something I was meant to forget. I’m sure it’s nothing.

I don't think there is such a thing as being paranoid. If you had to describe what it reminded you of, the feeling it gave you, what would it be?

Sorry, just being paranoid. It reminded me of something, I'm just not sure what.

oh, nothing. Just something I wrote.

What is this? What does this mean?

No month of May
No twinkling stars
Shearing shears pulled the wool
from my skin and left me bare
Under its gaze
It never sees beyond me
God I
wish it would
Look away